1. This is my final draft of my analysis of a public space.
2. The suggestions and changes concerning word choice and vague pronouns definitely strengthen the piece. The piece comes across as more clear and focused for the reader, strengthening the argument.
3. I hope my argument makes you ponder that which is truly “Zeke’s” and makes you smile in the process.
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